[scrap] Frozen – Elsa & Anna – G | Let it Snow

[malurette]

Title: Let it Snow
Author: malurette
Fandom: Frozen
Characters: Elsa, Anna, Arendelle
Rating: G
Disclaimer: Disney’s

Prompt: «winter» for genprompt_bingo
Spoilers: either AU where Elsa was never afraid of her powers, or post film when she comes to terms with them
Author’s note: ESL author with uncertain grasp on vocabulary and rhymes and no beta-reader to check them out – if you want to suggest some improvements please do!
Word count: 275

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The snow gleams white on Arendelle today So not a frown should be seen
The kingdom gets a vacation On order of the Snow Queen
A breeze is blowing Like the joy I feel inside
I won’t keep it When you’re by my side

Can’t stay shut in Come look and see
It’ll be as good as you want it to be
For you I’ll pull on the full show
So let it snow!

Let it snow
Let it snow
We can skate across the floor
Let it snow
Let it snow
We’ll have a great fun outdoor
We’ll do nothing but run and play
The snow flutters on
The cold won’t bother us on this perfect day

It’s pretty how snowflakes dance; there’s fun for one and all
Don’t fear catching a cold but watch out for this snowball
It’s time to show what I can do
There’s no limit, no more taboo
My tricks my knacks they fly freely
You’ll see

Let it snow
Let it snow
Make magic fall from the sky
Let it snow
Let it snow
Will you give it a try?
Stand upright You’ll be okay
The snow flutters on

My powers flurry through the air into the ground
My soul is blossoming in pretty patterns all around
I’ll make sure everyone’s having a blast
Before we’ll have to stop I’ll make the good times last

Let it snow
Let it snow
Make it fall from dusk til dawn
Let it snow
Let it snow
All worries should be gone
Here we go on our merry way
The snow flutters on
The cold won’t bother us on this perfect day

Comments

[soleil-ambrien.livejournal.com]

C'est très joli ! :) J'aime beaucoup ce concept d'un UA où Elsa aurait grandi en apprenant à aimer ses pouvoirs. J'ai effectivement vu quelques échecs de rime, mais rien de choquant, et surtout, on peut la chanter en rythme - ce qui est l'essentiel, quand même, pour un chant ;)

[malurette]

Merci. Personnellement, je préfère quand même la version "après le film", sinon ben y'a pas de film.

Lesquels, par exemple ? ça ne m'aide pas du tout de confirmer l'idée que je me plante mais sans me pointer ce qui ne va pas !